Kia Ora bloggers
This is my message to my teacher that we have been learning at school. It is really important that you are able to send a professional email. So I can email people, do you do this?
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Kia Ora bloggers
This is my message to my teacher that we have been learning at school. It is really important that you are able to send a professional email. So I can email people, do you do this?
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hey Freya, Thank you for sharing your work with everyone on your blog I think it is very important for kids to learn how to write professional emails and I think you nailed it. Maybe next time you can give some more explaining with how you can write your emails. I remember learning about how to write proper emails in korimako and I think over time I have got way better but overall your work was great and will help a lot of people. Hope you have good holidays - Jhana
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