Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, May 27, 2021
Good or Bad commenting question's
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.

Kia Ora Freya
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you highlighted all the good and bad words
Maybe next time you could do a colour for the normal words
I think it is really good
Have a good day Tayla.C
Hey Freya!! I really love this blog post because it gives great examples of what we should be writing and what we shouldn't also this is amazing because it shows how to know if we are giving to much information. Maybe next you could do some about writing a school blog comment but overall you did great!!! - Jhana
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