Hi, bloggers for maybe 2 weeks we have been working on persuasive writing I decided to do mine on why pets shouldn't be allowed at school. Below is my writing piece, do you think we should be allowed to have pets at school? Because I don't as people could be scared and have allergies.
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, September 30, 2021
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Good job Freya its good how you said why they shouldn't be not allowed.There also good reasons! :)
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